The Cheshire Cat

Anijumper -- Thanks for the feedback! I changed what you suggested, but instead of 'story' I did 'narritive', only because I already used the world 'story' around 10 words prior ...

The following is a possible project I might work on after Blithe (my current story), if it's excepted well. I'm rather excited about this. It came to me randomly, as ...

Thanks Everyone, for all the great comments! Kaylyn - Thanks for the feedback. I stuck the period in there and I'll fix the 'OMG' thing. The one thing I disagree ...

That was a truly wonderfull read. I hadn't expected to read the whole thing, but I just couldn't stop. It had everything I could want in a story - humor, ...

Whooo! I found it! XD I've been looking for where you kept this story since you told me about it. Only today did I see it above the rest of ...

Chapter 3: In which Ebony is subjected to several alcoholic beverages, the explanation of what exactly ‘Imprinted’ is and a unbearably long ferry ride. "I am ready to meet my ...

Ben: HAVE YOU HEAR THAT FUCKIN THING? \ 'Heard' Okay that was the only peice of grammer I could find that wasn't up to snuff. *applauds* Other then that, I ...

Wow. I am extremely impressed by this piece. It's a perfect start to a story. In my opinion as a writer, the first chapter should always start out with either ...

I, however, was highly amused. “He’s going ‘pop pop’ when he points his gun somewhere. What a dumbass. This’ll be easy.” XD lmao... Apparently most people only do it if ...

Down the Drain is one of the more compelling stories I have noticed today. The title drew me in, and the interesting story kept me there. You use great descriptive ...

Jeez...I've been in the exact same situation. Are you writing this from personal experiance or creative expression? Whichever it is, somehow, this poem hits me where it counts. Excelent job! ...

Ask me no questions I’ll tell you no lies Share me no secrets You’ll get no surprise Wish for a quick death Kill for the sky Live for a brave ...

The Jackals come at night They come and sing their song They laugh their crooked laugh They try to get me They have Ever since that day The day the ...

*clears throat* Ah. Hello. I would have to say a knife, because it is much easier to hide then a sword. .... What? ...Oh. And my name is Death. What ...